Yesterday, you got to share your creative writing with each other. I wanted to share some of the comments you made about each other's work. We'll start with the comments from 4th hour:
"I really liked Kalyna's 'Lonely Face' piece because the drawing was detailed and cool and the metaphor was great."
"I really liked ER's story. I wanted to hear more about her main characters and the life they lead. The story seemed very thrilling."
"I liked Emily's because she made a great point about gender inequality. David also made good points about how inflated sexuality has become in society."
"I really liked Rebecca's idea! Very controversial... we could discuss that for a long time."
"I really liked David K's because the piece had clever sources, and was somewhat an uncomfortable thing to write about, and I think he pulled it off well."
"I really enjoyed Jerry's project because of the 'change' quotes that were in it."
"I really liked Molly's. I liked her drawings and thought it was really creative. She should do more of those! It made me happy. And it made ER happy."
"Anna B. drew a face made of words that were saying 'no make-up,' etc. and the girl was gcrying since it wasn't true. I thought it was creative and had good insight into society."
"I really enjoyed Anne's because it covered an idea that I often think about, she voiced her thoughts very well, and it really challenged the term 'happiness.'"
There were also a few others expressing appreciation for the more visual pieces - Kalyna's, Molly's, and Anna's.
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